My Life!!

Lonelykaren

My life is like a riddle
that i can never solve
always thinking what to do
when my life goes wrong

i feel depressed and suicidal
i have the need to die
im always thinking what to do
but i always start to cry
why is life so cruel
whos made me this way
i hate what life has done to me
in matters of the heart
life is not supposd to exisst
its supposed to die
when in thime the years will come
i always start to cry
hate and darkness
calls to me and
life will soon be gone
guess whos leaving with this life ITS ME WHO IS DONE.!!!
  • Author: Lonelykaren (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 1st, 2011 20:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: THIS I WROTE ALONG TIME AGO BUT TOUGHT ID SHARE IT.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Editing is work I'd rather not do myself, but sometimes our stuff looks better when we do. That said, you know God's our maker? Check out the short sermon on Mars hill in the end of Acts 17...it gives quite the perspective on all our lives and this world...I've found it useful myself....particularly the part where He says why....that we should seek Him and find Him, "though He be not far from every one of us....." Just a serious suggestion. This is a great piece for so often we(or some of us) do struggle with these thoughts that you're wrestling with in this poem....if we can find/if the Lord would show us the answer, instead of ending our earthly existence, that would be better. Good piece!



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