ONCE I ...................... Poem, by SUDARSHAN, at My poetic side

Once I look in the night sky,

I see the stars so high,

I see them, so beautiful,

With the beautiful moon they lie.

Once I look in the water,

I see the baby fish inside falter,

Some big fish act as the “halter”,

And run ahead of others.

Once I look at the ground on which I stand,

I see the birds land,

See the horizon, the sky and land,

Go hand in hand.

Once I see the creatures on the land,

And in the water,

Some are cold blooded,

Some are warm blooded.

Once I see the birds in the sky,

Up above they fly,

As if they have just got independence,

Their flight is so high

So preserve this beautiful nature,

With many beautiful creatures,

Let them show their stint,

And not be extinct.

Comments +

Alexandre Landsley February 2nd, 2011 07:32
Insteresting poem 🙂
- sudarshanFebruary 2nd, 2011 09:58
  THANK YOU.
Cheeky Missy February 2nd, 2011 18:22
Beautiful almost simplistic description of the creation/nature in its simple, lively fascination. I enjoyed this.
- sudarshanFebruary 2nd, 2011 22:46
  A VERY BIG THANK YOU.
  
  I SHALL BE POSTING TWO POEMS SHORTLY - ONE ON THE RECENTLY HELD FOOTBALL WORLD CUP AND TOBE HELD CRICKET WORLD CUP IN INDIA.
  
  KINDLY GO THROUGH IT AND COMMENT UPON IT.
  
  THANKS A LOT, AGAIN.
- Cheeky MissyFebruary 2nd, 2011 23:38
  Definitely hope to...I'm enjoying your poems.

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