I lie on the ground
And stare into space
The stars start to move
In the shape of your face
I see you there now
Looking down at me
With a cute little smile
That I like to see
You say "Close your eyes
Tell me what you see"
I see two people
Just you and me
We're walking the shoreline
With our feet getting wet
The horizon turns Beautiful
As the sun starts to set
I wish I could be
In that one special place
As I lie on the ground
And stare into space
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Author:
Mii (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 4th, 2011 14:03
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Excellent!!! La, and you are only twelve???? Beautifully depicted with the symbolism of stars and shore, the image is very fitting, and you wove it perfectly from start to finish.....all so perfectly love. Your use of rhyming as well as the rythm is great! I am impressed and quite enjoyed it.
Thanx. Well when I was in fifth grade my teacher was like getting us to write poems and I like didnt like it at first then like in the middle of the project I just loved it and she told me that I should enter the poetry.com contest and I did but then I had Forgot about it then in the mail they said I was gunna get a book Full of everbodys poems But I never Contacted them.
Well, you write very well....too bad you never got the book of poetry. If you keep writing this well, wow...just think what you'll be years from now...it is a fun hobby, especially when you have a good idea to write about.
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