Congruence
-by MVB
I want to be the rain and fall
On your body thin and small
To wet your hair with my love
With tender splash from high above
I want to be the wind and blow
Through your hair when I flow
With longing and with dedication
To whisper love in adoration
I want the earth to be forever
Caressing all your steps in tremble
And when you softly walk on me
Awake the shivers deep within
I want the lake to be instilling
In lily flowers love that’s giving
Their scent to cover your whole soul
To love me like never before
I want to be a fire burning
To light up deep desires and longing
To burn a fire deep inside
To be my always loving bride
I want to be the snow that covers
With love your body as it wanders
To snow on you a bridal dress
Forever when my life you bless
On beach I want to be the sand
To carve your love with steps on end
To warm up all your gentle steps
And tenderly your heart caress
I want to be all that’s surrounds you
To kiss when in my arms I find you
And where you go and where you be
To walk with you in harmony
I want to be the wind and rain
The sand, the lake and earth again
A snow to cover you in dream
And be your fire deep within
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Author:
Marius (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 6th, 2011 00:03
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Really good write!!!
Thank you for the appreciation.
Ah, so delightfully romantic! I hope she likes it. Such an alluring, enticing, endearing call of love, all-consuming forever love....your symbolism is so delightful, all the things you poetically want to be, loving her.....very, very nicely expressed. Excellent!!! Delightful, beautiful, well-written. I quite enjoyed picturing all you described,...it's a sweet poem!
Thank you as always
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