THE HIDDEN FEELINGS

tamm13

i said goodbye

but my heart wants to hold you tight.

i dont wanna be hurt,

but i was the one who hurt you.

i told my self not to cry,

but my tears suddenly shed without a sign.

i wanted to forget you,

but my mind always thinks of you.

i push you away,

but your picture here in my heart, makes me close to you.

i tried to replace it with the other face,

but still, i am looking on your face.

i told myself "it was just a summer fling",

but i forgot onething

and that is...

summer will only last for two months

but you lasted untill this month.

in between this lines

there is something hidden behind,

..."I LOVE YOU"...

hope you feel the same way too...

  • Author: tamm13 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 7th, 2011 07:00
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 53
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments3

  • Cheeky Missy

    Aw, very sweet, rather bittersweet, and delightfully expressed. You've depicted the mixed emotions, yearning and lingering desire very well. And the title seems so fitting, for the feelings were rather unknown to you and/or are kept in the secret of your heart, unknown to him. Beautifully done! I enjoyed it!

  • tamm13

    thank you...

  • SauravRHS

    Was a good one... Brought out the feelings well. Work on your rhyming scheme and use of words a bit and you will excel!



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