is this right or wrong, hope the answer is right
coz i could no longer control my feelings for you, oh my!
every second of the day your always in my mind
and wherever i may be,the thought of you makes me smile.
it might be so fast but i don't give a damn
i had to tell you,for all i care in 4 days time
i do believe in you and i believe this is love
no one can interfere coz now you're all mine!
your voice, your smile, your laughters drive me crazy
that i wanted so much to talk to you the whole day
the racket in my chest makes me feel uneasy
those songs of yours make me feel i'm a himei
i love you! i love you! please don't leave me
stay with me forever and for eternity
coz you are my life, my love and you're everything to me
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Author:
erin wynette (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 7th, 2011 15:50
- Comment from author about the poem: haha!!!am not sad anymore for i\'ve already found the man of my dreams- my love, my life, my everything!..this message is for him!
- Category: Love
- Views: 41
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Comments3
wow thank you!!!hope he also appreciate it like you do!God bless
Wonderful! I am very happy for you two! This is a delightful and beautiful romantic love piece...your title is too perfect! I quite enjoyed this!!
thanks again sissy!!!though am always having trouble with titles...
Ya, I know how that goes....and so does everyone else! Titles can be such an enticement, drawing the prospective reader to look further, so coming up with a good title is only useful if the piece itself is worth reading....and yet a poor title will make a good piece obscure....it's definitely a challenge.
yes you are right...the title should be catchy and somewhat intriguing..lol..
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