I saw roses smiling
Heard the birds singing lovely songs
What is this happening and for how long?
I saw the twigs dancing and all I can imagine
Oh! That was an amazing scene
I am talking of my beautiful dream
That was my beautiful dream
I was holding her hands and we were dancing around
Just looking into each other’s eyes, moving on musical sound
She was my everything as we both were in love
Oh! That was an amazing scene
That was my beautiful dream
Yeah! That was my beautiful dream
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Author:
michael rex (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: these lines are lyrical. i wrote this when i finished writing my other poem 'my sweetest' dream
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Ah, I love your sweetest dream! And you expressed it so beautifully with your images of dancing, and music, smiling roses and singing birds....it was delightful. I quite enjoyed it. Bet it would be alluring put to music.
i am really very thankful for you kind notice towards my this work.
i hoe you have enjoyed it. i am much glad to know that it has sounded lovely into your heart. i hope that i will get help from you in future for my further writings. well can this be put in to any kind of music?
how will you compose it?
i am happy for your attention.
I look forward to reading more of your work. As for music, I have never understood how anyone manages to compose new melodies, but since I love to sing, I also love to take familiar melodies and exchange my own words for them. Hence, if I would try putting this to music that it might be sung, I would try to see whether I know any tune that would work with it...but I haven't tried that yet.
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