"A Fortnight of Valentines"---my latest (crazy)whimsy....a collection of sappy sonnet (attempts), fraught with redundancy, and so hastily executed and crafted by imaginative fancy as to hopefully not be too repulsive to the reader. And yes, fairly UNedited, presently.
Day nine
(sonnet attempt # XXX)
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My heart is yours because you love me so.
As doves so singly see none but their mates,
I've eyes for none but you who animates
And makes life sweetness ev'ry day, and owe
As flowers which the sun their beauty show,
Th'enticement and allure which captivates,
To his most glor'ous light....your love creates
The sparkle in my eyes and cheeks' warm glow.
Your voice makes my heart flutter happily.
Your eyes with love endear, somehow entwine
My heart with yours so inexplicably.
Your touch the fire, which stoked by your design,
So brightly dances all for you aptly.
It's all of you and for you, Valentine!
22Jan11
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 9th, 2011 00:05
- Comment from author about the poem: So it's got more of a poetic touch with the birds and flowers, right?
- Category: Love
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Comments1
This is all for your husband.You are a pious woman.I am a pious man.Can we use the word pious?
yours lovingly,
JVL
Sure, we can use the term pious....I wish I might be worthy of such a label....it is for a husband only, but whether that will ever be my lot.....hopefully it was okay to thus imagine.
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