i couldn't believe that i found the one,
who,when i lock eyes with would make my world shine bright
possesing those sparkling chinky eyes,
which i love to stare the whole day and night.
it is a dream i could say, for unexpectedly you passed by,
the time when i decided to live on my own for the rest of my life.
my messed up world turned upside down,
i couldn't believe you fixed my ruined life!
i couldn't live without you now,
i wouldn't smile if you'll gonna leave me behind.
i won't stand up with this feeling- feather-like,
if you'll not be mine today, tomorrow and till the day i die!
some are happy, some are not
some condemn and laugh at us
they question us, they talk against us
and some might also stab us at the back!
but am not afraid, as long as you're here
my one great love is with me, who could interfere?!.
my love for you is as strong as steel
rust-free, stainless, forever be pure and clear!
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Author:
erin wynette (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 9th, 2011 11:32
- Comment from author about the poem: i can't think of an appropriate title for this poem..whew..originally it's entitled CHINKY EYES but then i changed it coz am planning to write one using that title...i wrote this last night while i was waiting for my turn at the laundry..uhm..i just love my erwin so much and he is my inspiration...
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Comments2
Sweet....I quite enjoyed your "author comment" offering further insight on this....made me smile...yup! He is delightful inspiration...I know how that goes.....it'll be fun to see what all he inspires your pen to share. "The One" is a fine title; since you indicated indecision, you could also use "eyes" in the title...maybe "Your Eyes"?
how i wanted to share all my poems for him but then, some are written in our dialect (ILOCANO, coz am from ILOCOS..northern philippines) and some in TAGALOG/FILIPINO, our national language...
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