BattleChrist

Spirit Fierce!

Whose pain breeds strength and rage ignites his will,
Whose weakness stimulates immunity and whose valour all his fears conceal, 
Whose wounds ooze out vengeance and whose hatred augments his skill,
Whose blood drips like sweat and every breath echoes his zeal 
Whose soul is by death fires baptized and heart encased in steel
O power of three ,the infinity ,i pray to thee ,with veracity
May a spirit as he ,so fierce and free,reside in someone as petite as me.
In perpetuity! 
In perpetuity!
In perpetuity!

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  • Dolphine29

    Hi! Well for me, I feel kind of longing and sadness in here. Like you are searching and admiring all features on strength, but … still looking and hoping to find and endure through time.
    Good luck, I hope you find what you are looking for.
    Best
    Dolphine.

    • BattleChrist

      Yeah true it makes you long for that strength and it makes you sad when you realize how can't always have what you desire.
      The pits of my life makes me want absolute power at times,I wish i could be as invulnerable as i've described but invulnerability to a mortal is nothing more than an illusion!! Every time the realization of strength comes with the unraveling of a new weakness in me!!

      Anyway Thank you for your comment and good wishes,I'll have the strength i desire if god wills it!

      • Dolphine29

        I do believe that we reach real strength when we let go of our real fears.
        Just my own opinion, but I am happier because of that.
        Best
        Dolphine

      • BattleChrist

      • Cheeky Missy

        Rather nasty, yet almost fittingly devilish? If we will stand by ourselves in our own strength, then guess you are right that we will be fierce....invoking the devil's aid to stand? In the Lord God alone will we truly stand strong....."even the youths shall faint and be weary, and the young men shall utterly fall: but they that wait upon the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings as eagles; they shall run and not be weary, they shall walk, and not faint." For He says He is able to make us stand. The image you paired with it is excellently fitting. And since I beg to differ, perhaps I should just not comment? Would you prefer that? May 'twould be wiser.

        • BattleChrist

          Well you surely must speak your mind and surely do have the right to differ ,I'd be glad to read your view!!Well my philosophy is "FAITH IN THYSELF IS FAITH IN THY FATHER" My prayer doesn't intend to invoke the devil in us .It aims at elevating our faith in ourselves and our abilities.It intends to consolidate our psyche so as to make us mentally invulnerable if not physically,The aim of this prayer is to make us self reliant instead of relying on the almighty for every trouble we face!! And a Spirit Fierce is one who doesn't need to rely on someone else's might and is able to absorb the best out of the worst like strength out of pain and will out of rage!!!



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