I saw a man in the bus
He was so poor and fully crushed
He wanted some food from us
But we had nothing on the bus
We think that we should help him
We buy some food to give him
He was so happy at that time
Help some one is not a crime
But his condition was not good
Because he didn’t get even two time food
Bus conductor asking him for ticket
Because he was sit on front seat
He said I have no money for it
So conductor ask him than why u sit
We decided to buy a ticket for him
Because he was poor and not in dream
Now his bus stop was coming near
He was either happy or full of fear
We feel very very sorry for him
Need to do something for his dream
His dream was only food of two times
Can any one full fill his dream one time?
Think when you are going for take food
Can u do something for this type of manhood?
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Author:
Jks (Pseudonym) (
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Comments1
Wow. What a poignant tale! Poor fellow. Glad you all took pity on him and helped him as much as you could. Thanks for this depiction of the poor and the example we ought to live. For your second line, perhaps instead of "...full of crush" you try "...fully crushed"? Same syllable count and probably expresses your idea a bit better...? Either way, I enjoyed it.
Thanks i will ......
Of course, I can say none other than....excellent! Thanks...I personally think it is improved.
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