Too Much.

phylock

I've been crawling on my knees
So much pain
Shedding tears seems impossible in this drought.
Crawling across a desert.
And when I thought I saw you
You cast a shadow of a rock
Am I just delusional?
What do I do?!
Do I lie here buried in the sand?
Do I evaporate?
Take me away!
please.

  • Author: phylock (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2011 00:45
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 23
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments2

  • Cheeky Missy

    Wow. Excellent depiction of....? Fascinating, intriguing, bittersweetly beautiful. I quite like it.

  • amberlea

    i like this poem.
    You can really feel this emotion put into it



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