Coming back

Paullyna

Coming back
Coming back
I'm so dying in your empty arms
Lying here
Lying here
Won't you take me there
It's over, so over
Just sleep with these lies
I don't need this anymore

  • Author: Paullyna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2011 08:02
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Alexandre Landsley

    Simple and short not bad

  • Paullyna

    thanks!

  • Cheeky Missy

    Interestingly intriguing.....what is the speaker coming back to since the speaker is dying in the "empty arms"? Why ask to be taken "there"? Fascinating....I don't quite understand it.

  • Paullyna

    empty arms...like there is nothing to hold on to..just emptyness..
    there...means like THERE in some better world 🙂

    • Cheeky Missy

      Oh, now I begin to understand....the empty arms symbolize then loneliness, and "there" is a plea to be delivered to a better, hopeful future. Thanks a lot for explaining!

      • Paullyna

        hehe 🙂



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