Free write( emotions of love)

DE016

How do we get in this emotion of love

 

Love is suppose to be a joyous but it gives a somber feeling

 

Where the heart is submerged in ice and can't be thawed out or healing

 

But we think that the emotions are so prevalent when you find love

 

But blizzards always come through your emotions but they never freeze the pain

 

But its like your wearing "I love pain" chain.

 

But love is so unpredictable in my eyes

 

Because it floats in my somber grey skies.

 

But don't get me wrong love brings serenity

 

But sometimes it can be your worst enemy

 

Where the firey pits of hell is scolding ur heart piece by piece.

 

But the pain never goes but it jus goes in a temporary cease.

 

But look at love as a good thing because it has you feeling warm and care free

 

But sad to say that love is not destined for me.

 

So appreciate for what you have before its gone

 

Because we kno that sometimes love goes wrong

  • Author: DE016 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 27th, 2011 17:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: How you like it?
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  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments1

  • Cheeky Missy

    I like it. It seems to express the "love" so many taste, which burns many, grievously hurts many and embitters many. Somehow, I think it is not true love, for although that may also pain, I do not think it treats us so vilely as you mentioned scolding your heart piece by piece in the fiery pits of hell and going wrong.



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