Free Write(Forever)

DE016

Forever is a day never promised.

 

Where happiness is always coming out of its slumber of abundanced.

 

Where the people will always treat you right.

 

Where the emotions of turmoil are at peace with no fight.

 

But that's a world that people dream of living in

 

Where people just live without sin

 

But sin is always seeping in people's vain

 

When the sorrows and pain of a person come down like black ash rain.

 

Where the grimreaper meets u at ur doorstep and say hi and goodbye

 

Where grey and black are colors that paint the somber sky.

 

But we always tell ourselves that things will get better

 

But no its just your emotions and heart go through a destined sherdder.

 

But life is rollercoaster that has no button that could be pressed to end

 

Because forever is never attainable in what world we live in.

  • Author: DE016 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 28th, 2011 09:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: How you Like it?
  • Category: Reflection
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  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments1

  • Cheeky Missy

    Wow. I like it. Your metaphorical expression of this miserable existence is fascinating and excellently drawn. Forever by this means is indeed unattainable. I suppose that is the wonder of God's salvation, turning men away from this living death, delivering them into His kingdom and promising forever.



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