the fight
-by mvb
i had a fight with the sun
he took his rays and left
the sun had a fight with me
i took my sun-comforted hair and I set
i had a fight with the moon
she took the tides from my soul and it eclipsed
the moon had a fight with me
i took the love i made under the clear moon and hid it
i had a fight with the stars
they took their nocturnal guidance and they dimmed out
the stars had a fight with me
i took the wishes i made under their watch and denied them
i had a fight with the sea
she took her refreshing waves and dried up
the sea had a fight with me
i took the dreams i had on its shore and i drowned in them
i had a fight with you
and you didn't leave
...neither did I
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Author:
Marius (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 28th, 2011 20:24
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Beautiful poem.
Thanks much.
Sweet! I love how you used the heavenly rulers to depict the situation you concluded with....in such a delightful little tercet. Beautifully done. I enjoyed it.
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