An oceans breeze an orange sky, let no sunset leave your mind. A yellow fusion a blowing wind that has every thought of a lovers memory, I love thy friend I love my heart that gives to all who holds me close. You are my dream a beautiful image I see even when I'm wide awake, and I want you to know that I will swim the oceans currents of the setting sun to be with you my Ocean's breeze.
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Author:
Jason Humber (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments4
Fascinating for all the colours you expressed, how very black and blue the image is. It is a delightfully imaginative image too. Your discussion is a tad intriguing....the ocean's breeze is the "her" the speaker loves? It is an enjoyable contemplation; and of course, making some nonsense makes it all the more poetic, right?!
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I really like it, it's like a wave of perseverance, no matter what happens you will reach and be there. Beautiful image by the way, because it’s incredible just to say the truth my own thoughts are as compelling as the way you write.
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Dolphine 🙂
Thank you to both you Dolphine and my cheeky girl, you are too kind and it's no wonder your poems are amazing and a pleasure to read.
Thank you, I would like to say that I want to read more of your own writings.
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Dolphine
I hope you like my poems because I really like yours.
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