This isn't what I was told; they said love is made of gold,
It's really sharp and bold, but, it’s darkness I behold.
I'm dead and cold, Filled with dread, I’m lost,
I've lost my hold; my mind won't do what is told.
Mother Nature is so rude; See, how deep down I’m fused,
Now that you are gone, all my dreams are bruised.
Your footprints are taken, which path to choose, I'm confused.
The wind knew your scent, but, with the smell of blood, I'm bemused.
Nobody saw my colors but you; nobody heard my songs but you.
You are my world and sunrise; your eyes are my night skies.
Your gentle shimmering eyes, your elegant charm and love,
You are an ocean, which never dies, with the clear blue sky above.
No..... you have....
Broken all the ties...
Won’t leave me until eternity, you had promised, Yes, You had.
Leaving me alone in hell, you have taken what I had.
If I had the strength and wings, I could search the height of skies.
Wherever in the world you are, Oh, Please, perceive my cries.
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Author:
Shyam (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry if my English is bad. Still learning the language.
- Category: Love
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It's really beatiful and a sense of lost and longing that brakes the heart.
I know the feeling, I hope that want you hope to experience and share comes to you sooner than you think; as I hope as well.
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Dolphine
Thank you!
Well, for learning that most dreadful language English, you do very well. It is sad, a grievous cry of heartache and heartbreak, with good imagery and finishing rather poignantly with the plea, so touchingly lingering still on that love. Excellent. You depicted the sentiment well, I think.
Thank you!
very good.I can relate
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