O summer comes in with a flourish
And leaves with a sultry-ish tang!
Melting us all with a soggy heat
And leaving with somewhat the same!
Seems winter's so tempestuous
When it gives 'way to spring.....
As if it would'nt lose it's grip
Without a raucous scene!
Oh.....wait. A snowy spring day that discouraged longing me.....looking exactly like winter!
If you can think it looks like spring
I'm hard-pressed now to see
What you find in this winter scene
That looks to you like....spring!
28Mar08
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 13th, 2011 00:26
- Comment from author about the poem: So like, I occasionally scribbled down ideas on the seasons.....not spring or autumn....afterall, I love them so well they deserved entire poems....just, and Why? summer and winter.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
Wonderful! Beautifully written!
Thank you!
I really like this poem. I wish Summer, and spring would stay forever, but I suppose if it weren't for Winter, we wouldn't be able to appreciate the beauty of the Summers' and Springs'. I Really like your writing, keep em' coming.
Thank you very much for your thoughtful, insightful comment.....I much appreciate it! Thanks for the compliment too. Excellent point, I suppose we DO value spring all the more after the dead barren chill of winter.
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