tears on smiling face

rajat mahaych

 

 Life seems to be a burden 
which is to be just pass on
so many problems so many hurdles 
and I tried to smile in my hardest
and found the tears on my smiling face
life is going dark like night without stars
what to follow don’t know what to trace
after singing sweet song voice became harsh 
lost everything in life's race

Once I started to go on the people's mind

They didn’t get me and called me blind

I too decided to kill the feelings inside me

And I got the idea to do it

But I felt missing my heart 

Why did it beats in my body

While it beats for somebody

Still I take care of it to show my love and sacrifice

Playing with the all time cheaters of life's dice

And I found the tears on smiling face

I even did the way they asked me to do

And they were lying but I was only true

And I know I was the only one with you

All I really know is the pain inside

And one dark night and the sky so wide

I just tried to say hello to everyone 

But I got my dreams out of my eyes

Still I have tears on smiling face

I have tears on the smiling face

I have lost my breathing race

I have tears on smiling face

 

 

  • Author: michael rex (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 18th, 2011 15:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: this poem is the one which i wrote in my bad times and i felt missing the one for whom i dedicate it. it shows my faithfulness and i have been cheated by everyone in this world while i have been always faithful, truthful to those all
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    The repetition of tears on a smiling face effectively communicates the thought, especially so much at the conclusion, leaving the reader with that assessment of the entire reflection. The symbolism of dark, starless nights aptly expresses the total blindness and lack of direction, the aimless groping to know how to walk and live. Your goal of showing the speaker has been ever faithful amongst liars, comes through rather softly, a rather defensive self-justification and plea of victimization. A bewildered and injured, upright character seems to be presented. Good job.

  • rajat mahaych

    thanks for your so much interests in my workings
    and i would to be thankful to you forever for motivating to
    i would like to ask you to please elaborate your this comment so more so that i can get it, understand in a more better way
    your this language is a bit typical for me to understand



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