Lonelykaren

MouNtAin!!

I stood ontop a mountain
gazing down and watching the trees
i saw the beauty and then i knew
that nothing could be more carefree.

Trees swaying side to side
moving to some unknown wind
dancing under the sky
to some really wonderfull beat.

Branches moving
scatering around
some break, some fall
all making a beutifull sound

leafs dancing upon the air
moving right , then left
all moving to the same melody
and not one single one afraid.

The air is clean and pure
gently caressing my cheeks
gently moving the water
thats down at the creek.

Above the clear blue sky
brids fly away as if to say goodbye
the sun shines so bright
and then it slowly says goodnight.

A sense of piece arises in m
and all my worries vanish
i gently take a step back
and leave behind the mountain.

                  yeah!!!!

I leave behind the mountain.





Comments6

  • Alexandre Landsley

    I like this.........it has some sort of soothing tone to it......nicely done!!

  • Lonelykaren

    Thank you. That is what i was going for.
    thanks for the 9. :)

  • hollyrice

    Good

  • colly wally

    I can identify with this - the peace and joy that comes from God's creation. Lovely poetry.

    • Lonelykaren

      thank you thats what i was going for .
      thanks for the 9 i really apreaciate it.

    • Bandiras86

      Really great gob

    • Bandiras86

      Thanks a lot for your efforts.... (let nature be your teacher), nice poem Lonelykaren, keep going.



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