MouNtAin!! Poem, by Lonelykaren, at My poetic side

I stood ontop a mountain

gazing down and watching the trees

i saw the beauty and then i knew

that nothing could be more carefree.

Trees swaying side to side

moving to some unknown wind

dancing under the sky

to some really wonderfull beat.

Branches moving

scatering around

some break, some fall

all making a beutifull sound

leafs dancing upon the air

moving right , then left

all moving to the same melody

and not one single one afraid.

The air is clean and pure

gently caressing my cheeks

gently moving the water

thats down at the creek.

Above the clear blue sky

brids fly away as if to say goodbye

the sun shines so bright

and then it slowly says goodnight.

A sense of piece arises in m

and all my worries vanish

i gently take a step back

and leave behind the mountain.

yeah!!!!

I leave behind the mountain.

Comments +

Alexandre Landsley March 23rd, 2011 21:23
I like this.........it has some sort of soothing tone to it......nicely done!!
Lonelykaren March 25th, 2011 14:52
Thank you. That is what i was going for.
thanks for the 9. 🙂
hollyrice April 4th, 2011 12:31
Good
colly wally April 13th, 2011 01:50
I can identify with this - the peace and joy that comes from God's creation. Lovely poetry.
- LonelykarenApril 13th, 2011 15:17
  thank you thats what i was going for .
  thanks for the 9 i really apreaciate it.
Bandiras86 May 20th, 2011 05:20
Really great gob
- LonelykarenMay 22nd, 2011 23:55
  THank you.
Bandiras86 February 23rd, 2012 12:31
Thanks a lot for your efforts.... (let nature be your teacher), nice poem Lonelykaren, keep going.

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