Emi

Falling Freely

I want to fall like the rain falls

Free and without care of destination

Whether it be the hard pavement

Or a blanket of dew-covered grass

 

I want to shine like the sun shines

Ceaselessly and without failure

Bringing warmth and happiness

To all who are to behold its light

 

I want to sing like the birds sing

Not worrying at all about being heard

Neither about the current time of day

Or about what anyone thinks of them

 

I want to fly like the clouds fly

Just gracefully soaring above the world

Above all of the artificiality and cities

Letting the rain fall down freely

Upon the hard pavement

Or a blanket of dew-covered grass

 

 

Comments5

  • broken_dreams23

    aha good job! it's nice to try something new once in a while 🙂

    • Emi

      Haha yeah. 🙂 Thanks. 🙂

    • Nexuscjt

      Well written! The feeling of freedom is well expressed, I loved it. Good job!

      • Emi

        Thank you! 🙂

      • CleanGirl_17

        i really like this poem, you did an excellent job

        • Emi

          Thank you. 🙂

        • Nia Nour

          I`m really impressed! with so much feeling and melody inside!

          • Emi

            Thank you! 🙂

          • Anna

            I seriously don't know how you come up with ideas like this... -.-"
            You're a natural born poet XD
            Your free style is super good 😀

            • Emi

              Haha thank you. 🙂



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