I want to fall like the rain falls
Free and without care of destination
Whether it be the hard pavement
Or a blanket of dew-covered grass
I want to shine like the sun shines
Ceaselessly and without failure
Bringing warmth and happiness
To all who are to behold its light
I want to sing like the birds sing
Not worrying at all about being heard
Neither about the current time of day
Or about what anyone thinks of them
I want to fly like the clouds fly
Just gracefully soaring above the world
Above all of the artificiality and cities
Letting the rain fall down freely
Upon the hard pavement
Or a blanket of dew-covered grass
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Author:
Emi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 15th, 2011 13:48
- Comment from author about the poem: This is a really different poem for me, for a couple reasons. 1) It's free-verse, and 2) it's not depressing and/or about love! :) So, since I haven't written anything in a while anyway, I figure I'd try something new.
- Category: Nature
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Comments5
aha good job! it's nice to try something new once in a while 🙂
Haha yeah. 🙂 Thanks. 🙂
Well written! The feeling of freedom is well expressed, I loved it. Good job!
Thank you! 🙂
i really like this poem, you did an excellent job
Thank you. 🙂
I`m really impressed! with so much feeling and melody inside!
Thank you! 🙂
I seriously don't know how you come up with ideas like this... -.-"
You're a natural born poet XD
Your free style is super good 😀
Haha thank you. 🙂
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