The landscape, trees, and hills
Quickly lost behind our car
Giving me shivers and chills
As I wistfully watch from afar
Quickly lost behind our car
There are enchanted domains
As I wistfully watch from afar
Their king bravely reigns
There are enchanted domains
Hidden in the hills and trees
Their king bravely reigns
The magic blows in the breeze
Hidden in the hills and trees
Wonders are waiting to be found
The magic blows in the breeze
If you would only just look around
Wonders are waiting to be found
Enchantment is far and wide
If you would only just look around
On each and every car ride
Enchantment is far and wide
So I gaze longingly at it all
On each and every car ride
Winter, summer, spring, and fall
So I gaze longingly at it all
Yet I notice a distressing trend
Winter, summer, spring, and fall
All car rides must come to an end
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Author:
Emi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 27th, 2011 14:58
- Comment from author about the poem: This is another poem for another figment contest. I had to write something to do with a car ride so, yeah. :) It's a pantoum, by the way.
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
I wanna try that phantoum thing 🙂
Aha good luck on the contest and good job!
Thanks. 🙂 You should - it's really fun. A bit more challenging at times, but fun.
Yay! Another pantoum! Hey, you're pretty good at this... REALLY good at this!
Thank you. 🙂 You should definitely try it. 🙂
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