You left me in the storm
Laughing as you went
Drenched in rain and tears
I didn’t understand what it meant
The lightning struck nearby
And the thunder was loud in my ears
But you left me blind and deaf
In the middle of all my fears
The air was frigid and cold
And you left me there shaking
Frozen to the ground where I stood
My head and heart were aching
I felt without thinking
And now I’m but a ghost
You thought without feeling
And that’s what hurt me the most
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Author:
Emi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 2nd, 2011 17:54
- Comment from author about the poem: Kind of going back to my usual - a depressing poem with a rhyme scheme. :)
- Category: Sad
- Views: 31
- Users favorite of this poem: samlagerblom, Anna
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Comments3
Awww don't be sad! Keep smiling 🙂
Good job
Haha thank you! 🙂 I'm actually quite happy at the moment! 🙂
That's good then 🙂
Owww I like 🙂
Thanks. 🙂
I've read the comments, and if you are sad about the situation, then don't be. Sad things aren't worth our time, and so we shouldn't dwell on them. Now, happy things, on the other hand... keep them for a life time, 'cause they'll always make you smile!
Haha thank you. 🙂 Thanks for your concern - I'm happy at the moment. 🙂
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