Goodbye Poem, by Hope, at My poetic side

I finally got my signal to go
As we take our final embrace
Where will it take us? I don't know
I wished I was never brought into this place

As we take our final embrace
I shall continue on my quest
I wished I was never brought into this place
I still longed for happiness

I shall continue my quest
A place where I finally belong
I still longed for happiness
I know one day it'll come along

A place where I finally belong
A place where I will be happy
I know one day it'll come along
One day I'll be free

A place where I can be happy
Please help me find my way
One day I'll be free
Everything will be ok

Please help me find my way
I need to escape this Hell
Everything will be ok
I need to find a place to dwell

I need to escape this Hell
I'm really glad we've met
I need to find a place to dwell
It's not over yet

I'm really glad we've met
Slow down as I bid goodbye
It's not over yet
So there's no reason to cry

Author: Hope (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
Published: July 5th, 2011 18:53
Comment from author about the poem: aha i tried that pantoum thingy or watever :P so yeah tell me what u guys think :P
Category: Sad
Views: 35
Users favorite of this poem: Emi

Comments +

Emi July 5th, 2011 20:20
Awwwww sad... 🙁 But very awesome. 🙂 I really like pantoums.
- broken_dreams23July 6th, 2011 00:25
  Aha yeah it's sa..
  And thanks! They're actually so fun 🙂
Anna July 21st, 2011 07:22
You did a pantoum too!! I LOVE it! I'm still hesitating to put mine up by the way 😛
- broken_dreams23July 21st, 2011 07:44
  yeah i gave it a shot 😛
  and you should put it up 🙂
  and thanks!

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