Last dash to the finish line!

Huzaidi Hashim

The first cycle seems like a bore,

What’s in our minds we can ignore

Just a few days and you're out d door

Skipping and jumping forevermore!

 

A second, a third, and soon a four

As the pain runs from tip to core

Sucking every ounce of your vigor

Til your jaw drops to the floor

 

But .. you’ve been told before

this race still demands for more.

Every cycle seems a heavy chore

But a final dash will come I’m sure

 

Stay on the line sayang!

We know you can finish it!

 

From Abah (Dad)!

 

  • Author: Huzaidi Hashim (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 10th, 2011 23:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: My daughter will be going through the last cycle of the Chemotherapy for the cancer she just removed. Her marriage was to let her feel that her future is secure and she has nothing to worry about. Unfortunately chemotherapy has taxed her spirits so deeply making every cycle harder and harder! This poem was written to make cheer her spirits and to tell her that we love her (Sayang is Darling in Malay)and that we'll be there to keep her going through the last dash to the ticker rape!
  • Category: Family
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Thank you for the very helpful author's note. Oh, how sweet and poignant this is! May she recover from the horrendous cruel solution to cancer and bounce back shortly! It is precious because of the love that is cheering the wearied racer to hang in there. Sweet. I like it.



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