I feel so lonely when were apart
you complete me
you fill my whole heart
you show me your tender love
you show me that your the one
you've always shown me that you cared
now im showin you
that i feel in Despair
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Author:
taia ewards (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 23rd, 2011 17:22
- Comment from author about the poem: that if your truly in love you may never want to part
- Category: Love
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Comments1
The expression of total attachment and fulfillment perfectly expresses being "in love." The element of despair in both the title and conclusion is a tad confusing, as if this is only the first stanza to a larger work. Wherefore despair? Excellent depiction.
ill try to make myself soud more clear for your approval
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