When you went away

Huzaidi Hashim

When you first went away

A hole was left in me

Everything was not the way

The way it used to be

 

Though I know it is destined

And you are where you should be

My heart still aches and bleeds

Coz you’re a part of me

 

But soon I'll realize

that we each have a mission

To complete, fulfill and abide

the responsibilities Allah had given

 

Now the world shall be a witness

Of a love story so grand and great

Coz we had chosen Allah as first

To save and protect our faith

 

So I’ll be waiting here, my dear,

Knowing I’ll see your smile

On the day that you appear

Coz you know that I am fine

  • Author: Huzaidi Hashim (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 18th, 2011 08:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem was written by my daughter for her husband who has just returned to Medina Saudi Arabia to continue his studies. Although it is her first attempt at poetry, we are happy because it is a good indicator that she has almost fully recovered from the side-effects of the Chemotherapy. Hopefully with God's grace we will eventually see the radiance in her again
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  • Cheeky Missy

    The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for the bride's heart indeed would suffer greatly (it seems to ignorant/inexperienced me) when her husband must be absent. La, but she has a lot of suffering to bear and she is bearing it bravely and beautifully it appears to me. I hope their separation may somehow not seem as long as it is and that it may not be very long. This is beautiful. She writes well. The imagery in the S1 one is poignant, powerful and superb in indicating the loss.

  • Huzaidi Hashim

    Thanks Cheeky Missy ... I'm sure my daughter will appreciate your comments on her poem

  • tamm13

    i love this poem. it reminds me of my first love. we separated because we have prioritize our study. even if we were miles a part. i still love him and i am hoping that we will meet again..



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