When you first went away
A hole was left in me
Everything was not the way
The way it used to be
Though I know it is destined
And you are where you should be
My heart still aches and bleeds
Coz you’re a part of me
But soon I'll realize
that we each have a mission
To complete, fulfill and abide
the responsibilities Allah had given
Now the world shall be a witness
Of a love story so grand and great
Coz we had chosen Allah as first
To save and protect our faith
So I’ll be waiting here, my dear,
Knowing I’ll see your smile
On the day that you appear
Coz you know that I am fine
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Author:
Huzaidi Hashim (
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- Published: September 18th, 2011 08:25
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem was written by my daughter for her husband who has just returned to Medina Saudi Arabia to continue his studies. Although it is her first attempt at poetry, we are happy because it is a good indicator that she has almost fully recovered from the side-effects of the Chemotherapy. Hopefully with God's grace we will eventually see the radiance in her again
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Comments3
The author's explanatory note makes this piece so much more special, for the bride's heart indeed would suffer greatly (it seems to ignorant/inexperienced me) when her husband must be absent. La, but she has a lot of suffering to bear and she is bearing it bravely and beautifully it appears to me. I hope their separation may somehow not seem as long as it is and that it may not be very long. This is beautiful. She writes well. The imagery in the S1 one is poignant, powerful and superb in indicating the loss.
Thanks Cheeky Missy ... I'm sure my daughter will appreciate your comments on her poem
i love this poem. it reminds me of my first love. we separated because we have prioritize our study. even if we were miles a part. i still love him and i am hoping that we will meet again..
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