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tamm13


you came
Just in time
and i am so happy for
Having you for a lifetime.
it's like
A part of me is incomplete
without your presence, i almost evaporate.
Zeus could trick us and
made another me,
Athenna may steal your beauty
so i wont recognize you easily, but
Destiny will dictates us
cu'z God created you as my perfect mate
Eternal love is our fate.

  • Author: tamm13 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2011 01:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: A friend of mine asked me to create a poem that combines his name with his girl friend' name, so this was the outcome of the poem. i hope they will like it..
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 27
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Belinda AMeharry

    Love this poem. So simple yet it says much.
    Much Love and Light

    • tamm13

      thanks a lot...

    • Cheeky Missy

      Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I declare, what a romantic poem! The imagery is wonderful and the sentiment superb! This seems a beautiful tribute to the love of two people and the sincerity of their affections. I really like it.

      • tamm13

        thank you. i hope someone will also write a poem for me.



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