you came
Just in time
and i am so happy for
Having you for a lifetime.
it's like
A part of me is incomplete
without your presence, i almost evaporate.
Zeus could trick us and
made another me,
Athenna may steal your beauty
so i wont recognize you easily, but
Destiny will dictates us
cu'z God created you as my perfect mate
Eternal love is our fate.
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Author:
tamm13 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A friend of mine asked me to create a poem that combines his name with his girl friend' name, so this was the outcome of the poem. i hope they will like it..
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Comments2
Love this poem. So simple yet it says much.
Much Love and Light
thanks a lot...
Well they are ingrates if they do not like this wonderful piece! I declare, what a romantic poem! The imagery is wonderful and the sentiment superb! This seems a beautiful tribute to the love of two people and the sincerity of their affections. I really like it.
thank you. i hope someone will also write a poem for me.
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