The neighbours' music pulses through the wall-
they have bad taste. Restless, I tie my shoes
and leave. Drawn downhill by traffic white noise
on Lewes Road, the street no different now
than when I taught myself this city through
a bus window two years ago. I walk.
Saint Peter's Church throws shadows on my walk;
a welcome tunnel through the humid wall
of April sunlight bursting madly through
a long, restraining winter. Skilled, my shoes-
avoid the clamour of the Laines for now-
they pick their way toward the sea's hushed noise.
Finding a bench removed from tourist-noise
I recognise the stones on which I walk:
This spot, where Amy (Masters student now)
once ran too fast to stop before the wall
of over-eager waves absorbed her shoes.
She traipsed back with her socks soaked through.
I smile and watch the memory play through
then leave, disturbed by heartless seagull noise.
They strut with menace, cracked like beggars' shoes,
their copper eyes are acid as I walk
away. A firing squad on the sea wall
takes wing, and I'm back up on the road now.
I crave the heaving overcrowded Laines now;
the sweating hippies drift serenely through
saxophone alleys a nagchampa wall
and everywhere their vivid flavoured noise.
The cobblestones feel wonderful to walk
on; press conspicuously at my shoes.
Identifying Pawo by his shoes
untied and frayed, pausing, he sees me now.
Hello dear man! Embracing when I walk
to greet him, wisdom peering softly through
meek orange robes rustling above the noise
around us, in the shade cast by the wall.
My shoes flash quick as I hurry home through
Brighton, inspired now by every noise
and sight and thought, and I could walk through walls.
- Author: Bokononsense ( Offline)
- Published: November 3rd, 2011 12:01
- Comment from author about the poem: 28/04/11- Sestina in iambic pentameter. A poem about my friend Pawo; a nomadic buddhist monk whom I encountered on the streets of Brighton some years ago where he was collecting money for charity. When he is in town, he collects every day in the same place and I go to talk with him frequently, as his charisma and supportiveness are a wonderful inspiration both creatively and emotionally.
- Category: Friendship
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Comments1
Wow. I love all the imagery, it is captivating! The reader travels along tasting that other world and brief moments quite laden with so much to absorb, feel, hear, and see! Awesome! I am too accustomed to rhyming, so stumbled at the first stanza's seeming lack, too delighted with the images and sensations to stop and examine more closely.
If I may be so bold, the author's note says it is in iambic pentametre. That means that every second syllable is accented. The flow begins and travels beautifully rythmic until the second sentence begins in the second line of S1. "Restless" is accented on the first syllable, and "restless" is the 5th and 6th syllables respectively, therefore the flow abruptly trips having accented "taste" and then stumbles in to accenting "RESTless" when it needed an unaccented syllable between "TASTE." and "RESTless." You see at all what I mean? Mastering that little dilemma of truly iAMbic will aid you in sonneteering.
Hope you didn't mind.
Anyway, I really enjoyed all the imagery and scenarios created. It was a fun little traipse!
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