LOOKING BACK

lynn

I WISH I COULD TURN BACK THE HANDS OF TIME

RETURN TO SENDER MY SORROW

LIVING OUT THE FUN TIMES OF MY LIFE

A PERFECT MERRIAGE, A LOVING FAMILY

A HOUSE FULL OF LOVE

BUT NOW THAT IS NOT THE LIFE I LIVE

I NEED ANSWERS FROM ABOVE

THINKING HARD WHAT LIFE WOULD BE LIKE

MY HEART FILLED WITH LAUGHTGER AND JOY

WONDER IF I'M HAVE A GIRL OR BOY

UPON THE NEW ARRIVAL MY WORLD

WOULD BE SO COMPLETE

A LOVING HUSBAND A BUNDLE OF JOY

MAKING THINGS SO SWEET

YES THOSE WERE THE GOOD OLD DAYS

IF I COULD JUST RETURN

APPARENTLY GOD HAS ANOTHER PLAN

THERE'S MORE TO LIFE THAT I MUST LEARN

  • Author: Lynn (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 26th, 2012 21:38
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Gently poignant musing on reality and dreams, concluding excellently. Lovely use of end-rhyming, though if you wish to improve, making which lines (ie, every other or all) rhyme, as well as regulating the syllables and foot would also help...that is, if you wish to tweak or make it even better. As it stands it is a beautiful poetic tribute to reality, thought-provoking with great imagery. Welcome to P&P!

  • lynn

    Thank you for your feed back.



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