diamonddagger

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the answer ~ needs a question
a child ~ needs a home
the christmas tree ~ needs a star
a poet ~ needs a poem

halloween ~ needs trick or treaters
a torn journal ~ needs some glue
and empty glass ~ needs filled with wine
and my empty heart ~ needs filled with you

Comments4

  • Cheeky Missy

    Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the comparisons paired sweetly leading to that most tender reality of love's better half, whether by friendship or marriage/romance. Beautifully rendered. Thanks for sharing. If I might be so bold as to offer constructive criticism, I'd suggest using regular meter, which lends good flow and rhythm. If that's too bold, please forgive my cheekiness.

    ttfn,
    Jenny
    P.S. I am inactive here, and publish/hang out regularly at Poetfreak.com under my real name "Jenny Gordon" if you or anyone else cares to see my recent work.

  • baj-a

    beautifully presented. love the style. very sweet and soft and easy to read.

  • sokibgb

    Loved your poem. That's why I like to start my morning with Diamond
    in my life. Happy day, soki

  • bigwolf

    Nicely written diamond, I hope you are filled soon.



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