the answer ~ needs a question
a child ~ needs a home
the christmas tree ~ needs a star
a poet ~ needs a poem

halloween ~ needs trick or treaters
a torn journal ~ needs some glue
and empty glass ~ needs filled with wine
and my empty heart ~ needs filled with you

  • Author: diamonddagger (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2013 17:39
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 22
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.


  • Cheeky Missy

    Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the comparisons paired sweetly leading to that most tender reality of love's better half, whether by friendship or marriage/romance. Beautifully rendered. Thanks for sharing. If I might be so bold as to offer constructive criticism, I'd suggest using regular meter, which lends good flow and rhythm. If that's too bold, please forgive my cheekiness.

    P.S. I am inactive here, and publish/hang out regularly at Poetfreak.com under my real name "Jenny Gordon" if you or anyone else cares to see my recent work.

  • baj-a

    beautifully presented. love the style. very sweet and soft and easy to read.

  • sokibgb

    Loved your poem. That's why I like to start my morning with Diamond
    in my life. Happy day, soki

  • bigwolf

    Nicely written diamond, I hope you are filled soon.

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