the answer ~ needs a question
a child ~ needs a home
the christmas tree ~ needs a star
a poet ~ needs a poem
halloween ~ needs trick or treaters
a torn journal ~ needs some glue
and empty glass ~ needs filled with wine
and my empty heart ~ needs filled with you
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Author:
diamonddagger (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 3rd, 2013 17:39
- Category: Love
- Views: 22
- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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Comments4
Lovely and subtly thought-provoking with excellent imagery, the comparisons paired sweetly leading to that most tender reality of love's better half, whether by friendship or marriage/romance. Beautifully rendered. Thanks for sharing. If I might be so bold as to offer constructive criticism, I'd suggest using regular meter, which lends good flow and rhythm. If that's too bold, please forgive my cheekiness.
ttfn,
Jenny
P.S. I am inactive here, and publish/hang out regularly at Poetfreak.com under my real name "Jenny Gordon" if you or anyone else cares to see my recent work.
beautifully presented. love the style. very sweet and soft and easy to read.
Loved your poem. That's why I like to start my morning with Diamond
in my life. Happy day, soki
Nicely written diamond, I hope you are filled soon.
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