bigwolf

You Are Gone (Senryu)

There is a sadness

As your friends miss you so much

We will shed our tears

Comments4

  • Cheeky Missy

    Death, rendered softly though In all its devastating bitterness, stares the reader in the face as the elusive lost soul unresponsive heeds not the tears that would drown, to no avail. Lovely and thought-provoking, thanks for sharing.

    ttfn,
    Jenny

    • bigwolf

      And thank you Jenny for your thought provoking comments.

    • baj-a

      beautiful in it's sadness.

      • bigwolf

        thank you baj-a

      • diamonddagger

        so sorry for your loss, very well written

        • bigwolf

          Thank you, the world keeps turning

        • sokibgb

          A whole world of grief and love,captured in three lines, beautifully.
          Sorry for your loss, soki

          • bigwolf

            Thank you soki



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