I dreamed last night I had a castle
way up in the sky
With a door like a big red heart
and on it a bright white sign
The sign was for the children
who needed such a place
Where Kindness was The Ruler
and Love his lovely Mate
Where children's hearts had time to heal
where love and kisses lived
and words of kindness with laughter
Made children dreams fullfilled
My castle in the sky!
To keep the children safe
Where sorrow and sadness
were never found
For Love kept them away
My castle in the sky!
Where I wish I still lived
Filling their little hearts with love
My most wonderful wish
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Author:
Soki (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 9th, 2013 14:39
- Comment from author about the poem: Everybody should have their own castle in the sky, where their dreams can come true. Blessings, soki
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Comments5
Lovely and thought-provoking, all the more so for the delicate nature of the castle's precious occupants as well as my having lately mused afresh on Ian Van Dahl's "Castles in the Sky." There is an end to this world and all its evil, meantime our refuge, as you appear to endorse, is the LORD Himself, Who made the little ones and to Whom we cry for their salvation and shelter, you know? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and accompanying illustrations. Thanks for sharing.
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Jenny
Thank you, Jenny for reading and commenting on one of my favorite poems, I really do appreciate your opinion. It is a pleasure communicating with you. Have a hapy day, Soki
such a delicate topic and handled so beautifully and with such sensitivity. we should all have such castles in the sky.
I wish everybody did. The world would be a much better place, especially for all the children. Have a lovely day, Soki
i loved everything about this poem. The picture was stunning, the song went right along with you poem and the poem itself is truly what every child needs. great job!!!
Thank you Diamond, I am so happy you enjoyed my poem. This one is a favorite of mine .Glad to shared it. Happy day to you,Soki
thank you
I hope the children will have someone to watch over them, nice write soki.
I wish all children had somebody to watch over them, bigwolf.
Thank you for reading and commenting, soki
Beautifully Written Soki & well said
thank you colin, for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it, soki
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