Swaying in the hot August breeze
HANGING ON A HONEY SUCKLE VINE
Back and forth, suspended in time
Heart over mind...
Well I feel almost like 15 again
And I knew just how much you
Loved me just by the way you'd
Look so intensely into my eyes...
Well and I feel just as much in
Love with you as the years go by...
And this sweet in the hot August
Heat, HANGING ON A HONEY SUCKLE
VINE, back and forth, back and forth
Suspended in time, heart over mind...
Oh 'cuz there's nothing but a big, big
Blue sky up above and a blue bird
Singing the along to the wind chime’s
Song, sippin’ on homemade strawberry
Wine and feelin’ fine...
Just swaying in the hot August wind
Back and forth, back and forth
Suspend in time, heart over mind and
HANGING ON A HONEY SUCKLES VINE...
HANGING ON A HONEY SUCKLES VINE!
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Author:
moontigerntn (
Offline) - Published: March 20th, 2016 17:41
- Category: Love
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HI MOONTIGER my name is BRIANSODES and I just joined today, Thanks for a lovely poem 24 lines bursting with love & joiy. August is a great month for "Hanging on a honey suckle vine" - love the emphasis and repetition of that line. Your delightful poem is bursting with "half rhyme" VINE - TIME - MIND - AGAIN - IN - BIRD - PINE - WIND etc which gives it great rhythm & flow ! I really felt I was HANGING ON A HONEY SUCKLES VINE ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN.
thanks for reading my poem. welcome to "my poetic side." hope to see some of your poems. Bo
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