SPRING - nicest season
flowers bloom birds sing lambs skip
everyone's in love !
SUMMER - follows Spring
lazy hazy crazy days
carefree sunny days !
AUTUMN - leaves turn gold
Haloween - bonfires fireworks
swoosh and woosh season !
WINTER - frost and snow
everything white and pristine
Christmas and New Year !
Supreme Seasons - BRIAN XOX
- Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 21st, 2016 09:01
- Comment from author about the poem: I love HAIKU - short and often sweet. I also love each season so for me Seasons make a perfect quartet of Haiku - BRIAN
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 51
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if only it wouldn't snow during spring in new england.....
THANKS BR ~ Well to compensate ~ You get an abundance of Blessings in the FALL ! BRIAN
Beautifully written quartet of Haikus about the ever changing seasons. Absolutely lovely first poem!
Thanks CHRIS ~ I know you like nature ! and HAIKU ! So it pressed all your poetic buttons ! Heavenly HUGS ~ BRIAN I adored your FIRST POEM ~ Awesome !
Vivaldi's Four Seasons put in poem, well summarised too. (: Beautiful!
Thanks LYDIA ~ The Seasons always stir my muse and HAIKU are an ideal from just 17 syllables ~ short and sweet ! Hugs ~ BRIAN Love every note of Vivaldi's Four Seasons ~ Perfection !
Indeed (:
This is where it all started for you huh Brian? Your Haiku indeed is short in form but just right for word painting a picture of each season. Enjoyed this!
THANKS GARY ~ I love ENGLISH HAIKU and being a Classical Poet I try to conform to the 5 7 5 syllable triplet form and the Subject ~ Nature & Seasons ~ otherwise it is a SENRYU ! I am no too critical of others who break the rules ! I always like to add a picture to all my poems. and as in my latest Poem DEJA VU ~ the painting is critical to understanding the poem ! Your apposite comments are very much appreciated ~ BRIAN
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