Not sure where things may have went wrong
Somehow you sailed away,
Just the thought of you, I continue to sing a song
Wanting you more and more, until this day.
Obviously, the things I said, hurt you in a disturbing way
I apologize, wishing I can take it back,
Overwhelmed by the cold shoulder, given everyday
I was given an offer and now my bags has been packed.
Crying on the inside, I continue to do
Mysteriously wanting you, yet you don't feel the same,
Disappearing acts, I can hardly bare, only because I adore you
Keeping it 100% is what you asked of me, but whose the one to blame.
I'm not gone tell a lie, my feelings are mad and deep
Even-though we only have short versions of conversations,
The doors are now opened, timing reveals how soon we will creep
The sight of you and the scent of your smell, gives my heart appreciation.
Cherishing each moment with you in the dark
Only visible at work, with presence that's not so long,
Just a walk amongst the stones, with a soft breeze in the park
I will always have love for you, despite if things has went wrong.
- Author: zabrinahurst ( Offline)
- Published: April 12th, 2016 14:41
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 119
Comments1
BEAUTIFUL LOVE POEM ZABRINA - with a consistent rhyme pattern abab cdcd etc which give it great flow and makes it lovely to read and even more lovely to recite. Your poem explores the agony (and in some extent the ecstasy) of unrequited love. All adults share your experiences and your last line evoked sad memories ! I WILL ALWAYS HAVE THIS LOVE FOR YOU - DESPITE IF THINGS HAS GONE WRONG - Yours Brian
Thanks for the comment. This means a whole lot to me as I am trying to get started. I just help making sure that I have the tone, theme and etc correct.
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