HEARING is special
sounds unique - everyday sounds
like bubble and squeak
When all is black at
night - I see a light - and then
I value my SIGHT
I stroke my rabbit
In his hutch - warm and soft - I
love my sense of TOUCH
Bacon & Eggs and
hot toast as well - my sense of
TASTE and sense of SMELL
Thanks for reading - comments welcome - BRIAN
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 13th, 2016 03:46
- Comment from author about the poem: I love HAIKU they should be three lines and 5 7 5 syllables try some for yourself ! BRIAN
- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
i like it, nicely written.
Thanks TIGER pleased you liked it - BRIAN
Sorry, this is not a haiku.
Too many verses
Sorry JADE but I never knew there was a limit to the number of HAIKU in a bunch of Haiku just as there is no limit to the number of BANANAS in a bunch of BANANAS ! These ate not VERSES each one is a separate ENGLISH 17 syllable HAIKU in three lines of 5~7~5 syllables _ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN
Brian, I love everything that I have read so far. You write with love, compassion, humor, feekings, all the senses. I am sure not just myself but all who read what you put into words, wishes they had half your talent. You inspire me to keep up with my own writing. Never liked sharing my thoughts that I actually put on paper with anyone, yet you encourage me. Thank you.Butterfly100.
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