HEARING is special

sounds unique - everyday sounds

like bubble and squeak


When all is black at

night - I see a light - and then

I value my SIGHT


I stroke my rabbit

In his hutch - warm and soft - I

love my sense of TOUCH


Bacon & Eggs and 

hot toast as well - my sense of

TASTE and sense of SMELL


Thanks for reading - comments welcome - BRIAN 



  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2016 03:46
  • Comment from author about the poem: I love HAIKU they should be three lines and 5 7 5 syllables try some for yourself ! BRIAN
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 1090
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  • moontigerntn

    i like it, nicely written.


      Thanks TIGER pleased you liked it - BRIAN

    • Jade_Jester

      Sorry, this is not a haiku.
      Too many verses

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        Sorry JADE but I never knew there was a limit to the number of HAIKU in a bunch of Haiku just as there is no limit to the number of BANANAS in a bunch of BANANAS ! These ate not VERSES each one is a separate ENGLISH 17 syllable HAIKU in three lines of 5~7~5 syllables _ OK ~ Thanks BRIAN

      • Butterfly100

        Brian, I love everything that I have read so far. You write with love, compassion, humor, feekings, all the senses. I am sure not just myself but all who read what you put into words, wishes they had half your talent. You inspire me to keep up with my own writing. Never liked sharing my thoughts that I actually put on paper with anyone, yet you encourage me. Thank you.Butterfly100.

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