There is a candle
Far, far away
Shines bright, always
And banishes the night
All love it
Have lost it
Most cherish it
In the night
Wander far, wander wide
Wonder when the candle died
In you
The light, did it fail
The flame, did it go
Did the night encroach
Did terror it sow
There is a candle still
Among those who care
Among those who know
That the candle shines always
That the candle is you
And out will not go
And not terror, but beauty
Sow
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Author:
Reivax Camlost (
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- Comment from author about the poem: \"Hope is as a candle flame, shining in the dark\" I hope you notice that I shaped this poem after a candle...
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Thanks REIVAX neat poem - almost in the shape of a candle ! It is full of rhythm and sufficient rhyme to make it flow and easy to recite - a proper poem ! Love the message it sends like candle light. In this dark world. We are all candles sometimes bright sometimes just a flicker but always a glimmer to lighten the darkness. When I've been caving all is darkness and then the smallest of lights transforms the darkness into a subterranean wonderland. We can be like that transforming candles ! How bright are you shining today ? Thanks for caring - please check my odes - BRIAN.
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