Feels idle
And fake today
Everything feels absent
And grey today
I know that I should feel
Awake today
But this coma

Is everyday






  • rainbowhalo1

    dont i know it.you lay down the words of emotions of many.

    • AJ

      Glad you liked it

    • shewrites

      I feel the same...

      • AJ

        Thanks for the comment

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        HI AMETHYST (LOVELY GEM STONE - LOVELY NAME) Welcome to MPS - nice site. Love you poem and I empathize ! Spring should be bursting with life but sometimes it is so soporific - just like a COMA ! BRIAN

        • AJ

          Hi Brian, thanks very much for the nice comment. Amethyst is my birth stone and I think it sounds quite nice. But my name is AJ so feel free to call me that. I'm glad you understand the poem, I think it's also very much about your attitude and how you choose to perceive life. But at the same time I dislike insincerity, so it can be difficult to keep a positive mindset. Thanks again for your feedback, AJ.

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            THANKS AJ - and thanks for accepting my Friendship - BRIAN

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