He stand there with a look in his eyes
There is no gleam just soulless black void
When he speak I don’t listen
As the scream rippled through my throat
He speak no more just the look of death
As my whole world came crashing down
On my front steps
He’s gone never to be heard of
Is there something wrong with me?
People don’t see the hurt and despair
That’s left in his awakening
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Keep writing!
HI JESS - Welcome to My Poetic side - excellent site. Loved your first poem - despite it being full of anguish and despair !Well written with well structured lines. We all have bad experiences and so often the hurt remains. Other don't see it because it didn't happen to them. Also we try to move on and hide our pain. Thanks for caring & sharing - BRIAN
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