Today, I'm flesh and blood
tomorrow I will be dust,
I prefer to be wind.
Magali Aguilar Solorza
(Quiet Night)
Sunday / October / 27/2013 2:38:41 am.
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Magali Aguilar Solorza (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Poem # 4.- The absolute freedom of the soul is full flow in the world, moving the essence of existence and that makes it slide into eternity.
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Then while in the flesh and blood, let your heart be wind. No one knows where the wind comes from nor where it goes.. Keep moving. PS. I love the poem.
Thank you very much for your comment, that feeds the mood.
Thanks for posting MAGALI a great Senryu (676) with a great message. We are flesh & blood we will turn to dust - BUT - we can be like the WIND. Free Spirits used by GOD to help to blow away peoples fears and anxieties ! We all want to be "A breath of fresh air" in dificult situations. I love short poems Haiku & Senryu - they come from your heart and speak to our hearts. BRIAN
Thank you, very kind ... it is gratifying to read your comment. Hugs .
So simple, with such a deep meaning. This is beautiful
And very gratifying what you like, very kind.
HI MAGALI ~ Love the visual ~ Goddess of the WIND very sensuous ~ I always try to illustrate my poems it adds another dimension ! Yours BRIAN
True ... of greater magnitude. Sincere hugs
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