Crown Victoria Pantoum

Andrew1234

It's already been 2 years.

I was 16 and reckless.

I never took care of her.

I'm sorry, my queen.

 

I was 16 and reckless.

She was as red as a shiny apple.

I never took care of her.

She's almost all rust.

 

She was as red as a shiny red apple.

She helped me ask her out.

She is almost all rust.

The exhaust is getting loud.

 

She helped me ask her out.

It's already been 2 years.

She's almost all rust.

I never took care of her.

  • Author: Andrew1234 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 1st, 2016 19:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: Posting a poem for my creative writing class. This is a pantoum about my car.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 52
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    HI ANDREW - Great PANTOUM and a great subject. I'm acussed of treating my cars better than my lasy Friends ! When you post a classical structure like a PANTOUM you should explain the rhyme structure ABCD BEDF EGEH GAHB Thanks for sharing - my next poem will be a PANTOUM - BRIAN



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