It's already been 2 years.
I was 16 and reckless.
I never took care of her.
I'm sorry, my queen.
I was 16 and reckless.
She was as red as a shiny apple.
I never took care of her.
She's almost all rust.
She was as red as a shiny red apple.
She helped me ask her out.
She is almost all rust.
The exhaust is getting loud.
She helped me ask her out.
It's already been 2 years.
She's almost all rust.
I never took care of her.
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Author:
Andrew1234 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Posting a poem for my creative writing class. This is a pantoum about my car.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
HI ANDREW - Great PANTOUM and a great subject. I'm acussed of treating my cars better than my lasy Friends ! When you post a classical structure like a PANTOUM you should explain the rhyme structure ABCD BEDF EGEH GAHB Thanks for sharing - my next poem will be a PANTOUM - BRIAN
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