How can one hold
Such hate for one
But such compassion
For another;
While danger looms
He travels further down into the fray,
While all lightens up,
He grows darker in what is not seen.
A heart he may have,
But more corrupt it grows each day
Strength he may have,
But powerless is he against the enemy
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Author:
Kebiin (
Offline) - Published: May 12th, 2016 15:54
- Comment from author about the poem: For this being my first bit of poetry to publish on this site and at all realy, I don't know what to expect because I haven't ever really shared my work past my closer friends, but there will be more to come, because I've been saving my other works. So please give me you critics, I want to get better.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments1
WELCOME KEBIIN - An interesting first poem. It's a "free verse" poem but it has great rhythm because of its meter ! I like the title because the content of the poem is "polarised". In many situations we can have both hate and compassion and your poem explores this. The poem you have posted is well worthy of this site so please post MORE ! BRIAN
Thank you for your support, I will try.
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