MAY & JUNE - Two Lovely Ladies - Senryu

BRIAN & ANGELA

MAY - Sweet as blossom 

never too hot to handle 

promise of Summer !

Never underestimate 

May - she deceives and beguiles

 

JUNE - She's more open

caresses you - warm breezes

herald of Summer ! 

June gives you get up and go

June is the girl I love best !

 

Thanks for reading - BRIAN

 

A Senryu has 5 7 5 7 7 syllables.

  • Author: BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 14th, 2016 05:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: I love HAIKU (5 7 5 syllables) but often they are not long enough A SENRYU (5 7 5 7 7 syllables) is a Haiku with attitude ! Both my poems are about Ladies therefore I need an extra two lines to do them justice ! Thanks BRIAN
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