Intergalactic Love

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Eyes brighter than stars

A smile more mischievous than Mars

 

She spills out words like a genius

With looks more stunning than Venus

 

She's got me wrapped around her like an eclipse

With her voice made of pure bliss

 

She looks at him like he's her sunshine

The one who she proudly wants to call "mine"

She wanted to swim in his stellar soul

Winning him over was her goal

  • Author: SAL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 21st, 2016 11:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is a piece that an ex of mine and I wrote together. We went back and forth writing to each other. He kicks off the first two lines; then the next two are mine. It alternates like that, and the last four are mine. I hope you enjoy it!
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 70
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Comments1

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS SAL - another great poem ! In my experience LOVE is always intergalactic ! We spoon under the Moon and always see Stars ! I love rhyming couplets - gives the poem flow and an intergalactic glow ! BRIAN



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