I ask stupid questions
I'm annoying as hell
I have a lot of issues
What else is to tell?
I have a rockin' body
But I have a good soul too
Unfortunately people usually see the first
And don't take time to see me through
I'm always sure if people like me or not
But I can't read you
I can't read your thoughts
I need to stop writing
But then again I can't
I have no other way
To express this bubbling rant
Look, straight up I like you
Whether you like me or not
It would be nice if you did
But since when is life nice
I wanna see you happy
Even with someone else would suffice
I sound like a dweeb
A social anxiety ridden wreck
I'm sorry to say
Brown eyes were never my favorite
But then I saw yours
And all I want is my arms around your neck
And my lips on yours
Which is stupid
I know I know I know
Because you liking me back
Is just a girlish dream
But I just thought you should know
I'm sorry.
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Author:
SAL (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 22nd, 2016 12:46
- Category: Love
- Views: 24
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Comments1
GREAT FLOW POEM SAL - Bubbling with rhyme and rhythm for 34 unstoppable lines - I was out of breath reading it ! So much for the structure what did it say to me ? In the poem - I do see your soul ! You want to be liked and I do like you and your poetry - it's always challenging. Your poetry always makes me happy. Thanks for caring thanks for sharing - BRIAN
Thank you so much! I have an open fusion poem, if you would like to participate in it! I think that your writing style would add an interesting spin to it!
Sure SAL - love too ! Open Fusion Poems are fun. I try to galvanise this site with a POEM a DAY and comments so I hope your OF Poem takes off - Yours BRIAN
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