Dealing with enemies of my past, wondering how long it will last
The fear of you i do not have, for you to think that is rather sad
You do not pose a threat to me, hopefully someday you will see
violence i have overcome, apparently has not gotten there for some
We seem to be at different levels, with different scores
different settles
with no thought of friendship, let me let you in on a little tip
the level of my maturity a level you don't seem to be
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grindbaby16 (
Offline) - Published: May 25th, 2016 13:43
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WELCOME GB - Love your first poem and the cool way you dealt with your enemies. Love the structure of the poem - each line is an internal rhyming couplet which gives the poem great pace and great flow. The poem exemplifies your maturity - you have dealt with your enemies and their violence so they no longer pose a threat and the fear has gone. A very positive poem - thanks for sharing. BRIAN
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