Whats happened to our nation?
Giving our fake information put downyour iPad and phone
becoming unsociable in your own home
Fishing for likes what happened to the good old days scooters and bikes?
Nobody speaks on the bus or train
These mobiles are a pain
Sitting on your phone while visiting your family what happened to climbing a tree
caring too much what others think sending eachother a stupid link
Fiming a scrap we don't even get the chance to sleep and nap
Family holiday glued to your mobile and numbers you'll dial
We don't make eye contact that's a fact
It's all very wrong
And went on for far far too long
Stop being ignorant headphones in listening to a song
Tied down to a illusion a mobile
Your beginning to have delusion
Looking at that silly mobile phone be creative write a story a poem
Even on your phone in class we need to let this addiction pass
How long can this madness last turn off Facebook your family are around look
Close down snapchat
Becoming to lazy to exercise were becoming fat!
Get rid off bbm you can be creative with a pen
playing games all night long
Posting pictures half naked in a thong
stop what you're doing before it's too late
Learn to talk to your mate!
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Author:
nataliehughes (
Offline) - Published: May 26th, 2016 05:32
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Comments2
THE FOBILE MOAN OF A MOBILE PHONE ! Loved your poem NATALIE it echos my sentiments exactly ! I'm 33 BUT I have never owned a Mobile and I never will - too too intrusive ! Your poem is so so dynamic (as befits the topic) pulsating with "good vibrations" rhyme and rhythm. Your pet hates are mine ! i-Pads ~ mobiles ~ i-tunes ~ Facebook - snapchat ~ games ~ sexy selfies ~ we don't need any of these things and lived happy for thousands of years without them. I like my COMPUTER because of MY POETIC SIDE and other PERSON TO PERSON interaction (like my comment on your fantastic poem) but thank GOD it's not portable ! Thanks for sharing - Your Friend BRIAN
Good social commentary. As contrary as this is. the people on the sites you criticize are the ones that need to see your poem. Maybe you should post it on Facebook, etc.!
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