When I first met you, I instantly fell in love with you,
By the second day, I was calling you my boo.
Every was like a dream that we shared,
You rescued me and my heart you spared.
As they say new love is the best love,
You were everything I needed and placed you above.
As time went on you began to change,
The love, respect, and power I had suddenly needed to be rearranged.
You use to show me love and affection and you took it away,
I still cry almost daily, as I remember these days.
Why would you turn so cold towards me?
As I wanted to do everything and especially cater to thee.
You turned my heart into hard ass stone.
And speak to me as if I wasn’t grown.
Sadly to say I am still by your side,
Because I love you and will ride until I die.
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Author:
QueenZ (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 5th, 2016 17:22
- Comment from author about the poem: This is written about someone in my life I truly loved to only have him turn on me and became non-affectionate and cold.
- Category: Love
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Oooooooh LIA - I've had that experience and it is horrible when Love dies or changes. You have described the situation in your poem perfectly ! A dream - new love is best love - and calling him BOO (awesome pet name !) then change. Rearrangement of love - respect - power and even worse withdrawal of love and affection. Real Men do cry and it has caused me to cry as well ! Cold and belittlement what went wrong ? Staying in such a situation (we were not married fortunately - were you ?) is more than I could bear but millions do ! Love the poignany and structure (rhyming couplets) of the poem - Thanks for sharing - Yours BRIAN XOX
I was married, but happily divorced. This was about someone I truly loved. I stayed in the relationship for years because I loved him that much. I asked him to show me and love and affection and he told me that he is not that type of man. It crushed me. But I learned to become a stronger woman from it. Thank you for reading my work. XOXO
Love all your poems LIA (they are straight from your heart !) more please. YES some poeple (M & F) are COLD in a relationship and it is very sad for the more sensuous partner. We all learn from our experiences that is part of growing up I guess ! Yours BRIAN XOX
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